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The Pixie Detective

A pixie detective wannabe finds something quite unusual about her black cat when she stumbles on an illegal operation at the abandoned shipyard next door.

The Pixie Detective Opening Scenes


Script created with Final Draft by Final Draft, Inc.


               FADE IN:



               EXT. ABANDONED SHIPYARD - DAY

               Broken down boats of various size and makes sway up to the
               water's edge, rocking against the reeds at the edge of the
               bay's channel.

               Overgrown shrubs and reeds sprout up, dotting the football
               field size yard.

               Old dilapidated warehouses sit lopsided on a badly aging
               boardwalk type DOCK. 



               DOCK

               Small box like SHACK once used as an office, stands in front
               of the warehouses to the edge of the dock. Reeds shoot up
               tall enough to reach and partially hide the shack's front
               entrance.



               BARBED WIRE FENCE

               In the near distance, beyond the tall barbed wire chain link
               fence that surrounds the shipyard, a small RANCHER sits alone
               in the wide open meadowland.



               INT. SHACK - CONTINUOUS

               Two men sit talking at an uncovered dusty wood table. One of
               the men, the BOSS (40's) sloppy, heavy set, stubble faced, a
               man without the slightest notion of morality, chumps on a
               stubby cigar.

               The other man, TIGGY (30's) skinny, scrubby face, looks
               easily intimidated by men like the Boss, but a bully around
               the weak, wears unkept, filthy clothes.

               The two men play a game of cards and garble about something
               that can't quite be understood and filters down to,



               EXT. BENEATH DOCK, UNDER SHACK - CONTINUOUS

               A little pixie girl, CAITLYN (7) tomboy, wears shorts and
               summer shirt, listens to the men in the shack. Caitlyn
               clutches a Sherlock Holmes size detectives magnifying glass,
               and wears a Sherlock Holmes hat that nearly covers her head.

               A large sleek black cat, MISS BLACKY, sits along side
               Caitlyn. The cat watches Caitlyn with curious amusement.

               The male voices from above, now audible, filter down under
               the dock.

                                   TIGGY (O.S.)
                         Hey Boss. When those Asian girls
                         gonna get here?

                                   BOSS (O.S.)
                         Soon Tiggy. Just hold your pants.
                         You get any skinnier, I'll have to
                         tie them up with a rope.

               Tiggy gives out a retarded laugh.

                                   TIGGY (O.S.)
                         How much we gettin for them young
                         girls des time.

               Caitlyn looks through her magnifying glass up at the rafters
               of the dock. Miss Blacky meows.

                                   CAITLYN
                         Quiet Miss Blacky.

               The voices stop dead from above. 

               SUDDENLY

                                   TIGGY (O.S.)
                         What was that Boss?

               Chair legs scrapping over wood, CREAKS down below.

               Caitlyn scurries to the opposite end of the dock. Miss Blacky
               trots right on her heels. 

Script created with Final Draft by Final Draft, Inc.


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